Alison Sudol Colorization

this is the first time I colorized a pic. It's Alison Sudol (or A Fine Frenzy).

well, I don't have to explain images "original" and "black and white", right?
#1 looks like a ghost. my sis said she looks like Jane, a character from Stephenie Meyer's Twilight Series. and the lips are looking like clown's lips
#2 better now, but still dark. lips are still weird.
#3 the "not so bad" image

Finally! I took all afternoon doing that